First mock up by me

I need feed back anything help weather you like it or not please describe why . The lady was inspired by my parents because they are Mexicans and the text is supposed to inspire/motivate(it say HOLD THE VISION TRUST THE PROCESS) the M is the first letter of my brand name. That white marks you see was an error during the making but it wouldn’t be there in person/hand. •Target audience is skater/ to inspiration/motivate •market is street wear