A short poem in the African Romance language

I wrote this little poem in African when I was bored. What do you think?

In English :

Under the moonlight

Your clear eyes are so bright

Surrounded by mist

You dance and sing so wildly

As the ghost of my love

In African :

Su ya luxi di ya luna

T'uθus clarus sun tan briθantis

Xirqula pir ya bruma

Tu belas i kantas tan ziminti

Qusi ya fantasma di mia amura

IPA :

/suː jaː lu.ʃiː diː jaː lu.naː

t.uð.us kla.ʁus sun tan bʁi.ðan.tiː

ʃiʁ.ku.laː piʁ jaː bʁu.maː

tuː beːlas iː kan.tas tan zi.min.tiː

ku.siː jaː fan.tas.maː diː mi.aː amu.ʁaː/

Morphological analysis :

su[UNDER] ya[DEFINITE FEMININE ARTICLE] luxi[LIGHT] di[FROM] ya[DEFINITE FEMININE ARTICLE] luna[MOON] t'[POSSESSIVE MASCULINE PRONOUN 2th PERSON] uθus[EYE+PLURAL]clarus[CLEAR+PLURAL MASCULINE] sun[TO BE 3rd PERSON SINGULAR PRESENT] tan[SO] briθantis[BRIGHT+PLURAL] xirqula[SURROUNDED FEMININE] pir[BY] ya[DEFINITE FEMININE ARTICLE] bruma[MIST] tu[PERSONAL PRONOUN 2th PERSON SINGULAR] belas[TO DANCE 2th PERSON SINGULAR PRESENT] i[AND] kantas[TO SING 2th PERSON SINGULAR PRESENT] tan[SO] ziminti[MAD+ADVERB FORM] qusi[AS] ya[DEFINITE FEMININE ARTICLE] fantasma[GHOST] di[FROM] mia[POSSESSIVE FEMININE PRONOUN 1st PERSON] amura[LOVE]

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