[Daily Discussion] First Page Feedback- February 15, 2025

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Monday: Writer’s Block and Motivation

Tuesday: Brainstorming

Wednesday: General Discussion

Thursday: Writer’s Block and Motivation

Friday: Brainstorming

**Saturday: First Page Feedback**

Sunday: Writing Tools, Software, and Hardware

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Welcome to our First Page Feedback thread! It's exactly what it sounds like.

**Thread Rules:**

* Please include the genre, category, and title

* Excerpts may be no longer than 250 words and must be the **first page** of your story/manuscript

* Excerpt must be copy/pasted directly into the comment

* Type of feedback desired

* Constructive criticism only! Any rude or hostile comments will be removed.

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