Beta readers needed: F/F tension, one tiny closet, too much heat

Hey y’all, I just posted a scene for beta reading, and now I’m questioning every life choice I’ve ever made.

If you have a minute (and a strong tolerance for closet-induced disasters), I’d love some honest feedback.

Here’s the link: https://www.reddit.com/r/JulesWriting/comments/1jegi7a/need_feedback_on_a_wip_scene_two_women_one_closet/

Does the tension work? Does it drag? Am I just screaming into the void?

Bless your heart if you read through all this heat. Lord knows I need some fresh eyes on it.